I tried to make it sound like one of the nationwide adverts, it didn’t really work.
My first draft turned out to be a bit to complicated, it took me another two drafts to get a finished script however I was the last one in the class to finish. This wasn’t because I particularly slow, but because I was so good at acting, everyone wanted me in their piece. After completing our scripts we had to go into the TV studio to read our scripts out to a camera so we could use it in our portfolio.
I didn’t enjoy this script writing exercise, and a lot of the other adverts turned out better than mine, which made me feel great! I did however enjoy taking part in other people’s pieces, I think I’m a natural at acting and making a tit out of myself.
My Finished script:
Int. A man is at the reception desk of a golf course talking to one of the employees.
Employee: Hello sir, welcome to Cranleigh golf and leisure club, how are you today?
Golfer: yeah fine, I was wondering if I could play golf today, if that’s alright
Employee: yeah that’s fine sir. Just have to get a few details off you if that’s ok
Golfer: yeah sure
Employee: Ok…. Do you know anybody currently at the club?
Golfer: No
Employee: Ok…. Have you ever played on a professional course such as this one?
Golfer: No
Employee: Right…. Are you married?
Golfer: Yes
Employee: Ok…. Right, let me just add this up a second… right so you’ve got the
Opportunity to meet new and influential people… the new experience of
Playing on a professional course… and one day of relief from the wife…
Right, ok, well here’s your receipt
Golfer: HOW MUCH?!!
V.O: Don’t let your hobby lump you with a hefty bill. Come play at East Devon golf club, where none of your experiences will end with a bogie.
Visit the website of the golf course that inspired the advert at: http://www.edgc.co.uk




